good song. However....
Other than the fact that i've heard this melody a trillion times, that was pretty good for only using FL. I liked the beginning piano part, but around 12 secs you can hear those chords that so many people use way too much, and besides, they only sound good in a couple of songs. These chords sounded pretty good in this song, but try to be more original in your future creations.
Also, the part where it says 'Now for a break', should've had a some fx on it, like delay bank, or vocoder or something. It was also barely audible with the background against it. I did like what you did at the end with the modulations, though. That was pretty cool. =D
Nice song, though. 8/10, 3/5. Keep it up!